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REVISION #2: Title: THE PURPOSE OF THIS. Genre: YA Urban Fantasy. Estimated Word Count: 5000 words.

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The hardest working mage who ever lived devised a simple plan to cheat on the practice exams. Jeong Yeon Hyeok drew six stick figures on horses at the edges of the exam sheet and whispered as quietly as he could, “Thieving shadows, take shape, and learn the secrets of my woes.”

The bandits shook themselves awake, leapt off the desk, and raced across the tiled floor to the answer key lying flat on the teacher’s desk.
Really, really liked this. Not a nit to pick. I'd most definitely read on.