I'm working on a collection of short horror stories and I have a flash fiction piece that I'm not quite sure works. I've had a friend read it but I would really benefit from an honest critique. The idea was to challenge myself to write a solid horror short based on atmosphere in 600 words or less. This one clocks in around 550 words and I would love to have someone take a look & give me some honest feedback. Ideally, someone with a more experience then myself and has been around the boards for a bit.
It'd be great if this can develop more into a mentor role at some point, but a one-time critique is more than welcome . Please PM if you're interested.
EDIT: Of course, I'd love to read and critique any work in exchange. I'm most comfortable within the horror and thriller genres, but I'm also open to sci-fi and fantasy.
It'd be great if this can develop more into a mentor role at some point, but a one-time critique is more than welcome . Please PM if you're interested.
EDIT: Of course, I'd love to read and critique any work in exchange. I'm most comfortable within the horror and thriller genres, but I'm also open to sci-fi and fantasy.
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