Hi all,

Not sure if this is in the correct forum?

A work friend (nosey bugger) read something I had been working on.

He then purchased Panda eats shoots and leaves, to help with my writing. Because he feels my use of synonyms is un-improvable.

I am aware of what a synonym is, but I must not actually know what they are because I don't see where I am using them in my work?

Is anybody able to give me an example, just a few sentences, something with synonyms and something without? If it's possible

Thanks

Shibby