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Beta for 7500 word fantasy short.

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Hi. I was hoping to find a beta for my 7500 word fantasy short. I'm mostly looking for general feedback on it since it's my first attempt at writing one.

If you have a short of your own or one or two chapters of your novel I'll gladly swap.

Premise: Subjugated former knight -> bitter at his kingdom's collapse -> goes on a little raid into enemy territory to "unwind" a bit -> people die :cry:


Note that this is independent of the full MS that I'm seeking a beta for.
 
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