Do Zombie Threads get axed? This has been a fascinating read. I'm glad it returned to life and shuffled into my garden.

I had my spouse read the first chapter of my novel. I asked him for reader impression and if the flashbacks flowed. He compulsively marked grammar and punctuation issues. He's been the most use in answering chemistry and engineering questions. He would be an ideal reader but he's spoiled on some key parts of the story.