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Beta wanted for urban fantasy novel - 89k

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LJ Hall

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Okay, guys. This is a fantasy novel with werewolves and vampires, so. If that swings your pendulum, give me a shout.

What I'm looking for is a broader kind of beta. I've never had anyone read this all the way through before, so I want to know how plots hold up, if it lags, if it completely drops the ball. If I have any ongoing grammar or stylistic problems I'd love to know, but I'm not looking for a LBL particularly. I mean if you can't resist then bring it on, but I'm happy with just overall feedback.

I'm not much of a beta myself, but I could do a quid pro quo with someone who wants the same kind of feedback I do?

Thanks in advance, beautiful people.
 
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