Hi all,

I am finding it almost impossible to eloquently dwindle my Memoir into a query and synopsis to potential agents. Writing the book to me seemed much easier!

I have sent the book to 18 beta readers. My feedback has been "amazing", "wow", "powerful"... not one was discouraging and most told me that our story changed them. The Beta readers have really gave me a lot of encouragement, BUT...... I am struggling getting the story into a query form and even there are so many twists and turns its hard to even write a synopsis without losing the depth of the story.

I sent my wobbly query and synopsis's to three potential agents who I felt would be great fits and was immediately turned down .

This is crazy! Any wise advice would be greatly appreciated.

Keston