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Hello all,
I am back here again. I am looking for betas for my current WIP. I'm looking for a relatively slow beta read. 30-50 pages a week. Hopefully we could start with the opening chapter and move on from there.
I am looking for general: like it/ don't like it, that makes no sense, I hate that character, plot hole alert!-type comments. And maybe little notes where you think I could do more world building.
The piece is approx 85k.
One liner: Bryan must save the lives of others to transcend his provisional spirit status, but a malicious is determined to distract Bryan by killing off his family.
I am back here again. I am looking for betas for my current WIP. I'm looking for a relatively slow beta read. 30-50 pages a week. Hopefully we could start with the opening chapter and move on from there.
I am looking for general: like it/ don't like it, that makes no sense, I hate that character, plot hole alert!-type comments. And maybe little notes where you think I could do more world building.
The piece is approx 85k.
One liner: Bryan must save the lives of others to transcend his provisional spirit status, but a malicious is determined to distract Bryan by killing off his family.