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Looking mainly for content, character and plot holes.
Happy to swap beta reads.
SUMMARY: Broken Limits
Eleven-year-old Kate lives with her mother on the U.S. Army base near Roswell, New Mexico, in 1947. Kate’s father, a pilot, died during World War II; her mother continues to work as an army nurse. One night, just as Kate’s friend and neighbor, Billy, shows her strange pieces of foil that his dad retrieved from the wreckage of what may have been an alien spacecraft, a CIA agent arrives at Billy’s house and informs his family of their reassignment to Germany. The agent demands the return of the foil. Billy, not wanting to move to Germany or return his treasures, begs Kate for help. Thus begins a cross-state adventure in which the two friends use their wits, their knowledge of the terrain and geography around the base, and sheer determination to evade capture and reach Kate’s grandfather.
Looking mainly for content, character and plot holes.
Happy to swap beta reads.
SUMMARY: Broken Limits
Eleven-year-old Kate lives with her mother on the U.S. Army base near Roswell, New Mexico, in 1947. Kate’s father, a pilot, died during World War II; her mother continues to work as an army nurse. One night, just as Kate’s friend and neighbor, Billy, shows her strange pieces of foil that his dad retrieved from the wreckage of what may have been an alien spacecraft, a CIA agent arrives at Billy’s house and informs his family of their reassignment to Germany. The agent demands the return of the foil. Billy, not wanting to move to Germany or return his treasures, begs Kate for help. Thus begins a cross-state adventure in which the two friends use their wits, their knowledge of the terrain and geography around the base, and sheer determination to evade capture and reach Kate’s grandfather.
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