[font=Times New Roman, serif]The old man stood before me, aged and weathering, his head no longer holding the wit that once drew praise. [/font]
[font=Times New Roman, serif]Or [/font]
[font=Times New Roman, serif]The old man stood before me, aged and weathered, his head no longer held the wit that once drew praise.[/font]
One of the criticisms that I have received repeatedly is tense agreement problems. I want to correct this, but I also don't want to take away from flow unnecessarily. Which tense is more correct for the verbs? Why?
[font=Times New Roman, serif]Or [/font]
[font=Times New Roman, serif]The old man stood before me, aged and weathered, his head no longer held the wit that once drew praise.[/font]
One of the criticisms that I have received repeatedly is tense agreement problems. I want to correct this, but I also don't want to take away from flow unnecessarily. Which tense is more correct for the verbs? Why?