I am currently finishing up the last few chapters of a fantasy fiction novel. I am looking for someone who can assist in editing the flow, finding any plot holes (hopefully I have filled all of them, but those damn rabbits keep digging) and working with me to maintain tense. My story is given in first person present; however, I have the tendency to move to first person past when it pleases me and I find it annoying. I have been wasting time moving back and forth to chapters that are completed and done when I should be finishing the book. The book has religious, mythological, medieval and neolithic themes, but is essentially a modern adventure.

I have twelve chapters ready for the block but am nervous and really would just like some eyes on what I have done and a non-bias opinion on if I should just stick to my day job.