milutink
This is the logline for my script 'Destination Sacramento'. I need somebody to edit it and improve it. If necessary, I could provide a brief synopsis as well. Thanks!
"After he unluckily takes over the identity of Peter, a hired gunman on a special mission, John will find himself in a highly dangerous game of the ruthless gangsters, the unscrupulous politicians and the corrupt police, the game he could never have survived without the help of two women who love him – his deserted wife Dorothy and Peter’s most beautiful widow Barbara."
"After he unluckily takes over the identity of Peter, a hired gunman on a special mission, John will find himself in a highly dangerous game of the ruthless gangsters, the unscrupulous politicians and the corrupt police, the game he could never have survived without the help of two women who love him – his deserted wife Dorothy and Peter’s most beautiful widow Barbara."
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