I don't think her writing was that terrible. I read some of it. It is very rough, her sentence structure is bad, and her description is poor and not very detailed. But I can see some good in it. She does have some talent. At the moment her writing is just very, very rough. She needs to brush up on her sentence structure, add some more description, learn how to write a decent paragraph, and then have another crack at publishing. Her attitude needs to change though. No one is going to want to work with her if she contines to go through life with this "My writing is FINE." attitude. If she can take herself down a notch and learn to accept criticism she might be able to repair the damage she has done to herself. I wish her the best.