Hello everyone. I am interested in having someone read over a scene I will be writing some time this weekend. It's going to be a very powerful and moving dialogue as well as an emotional roller coaster and I would love to have some critique it for me (other than my mother.) This scene is really important because it changes the dynamics between my hero and heroine.

So, if anyone will be interested please private message me, and I will give you a better description of what the scene will be about, and a brief summary of the story itself since this will be a scene right in the middle of chaos. I like to write the scenes that jump out of at me the most first, just so I can have the basics written down.

I don't actually have the story typed yet but I do have an outline and will be working from that.

Thank you in advance!