I responded to a request for a beta and she wanted a synopsis of my WIP to see if we would be a good fit. Once I wrote it up, I got the bright idea to post it here to see if anyone else would be interested in it.
I have several people I am currently exchanging work with, but I think a few more would give me a better picture of what direction my WIP needs to go.
I basically need some one to bounce ideas off of, and give me general opinions of the work overall, not line by line crits. I will deal with grammar and such once the first draft is done. Right now, I have a prologue--which needs alot of work-- and a first chapter. I am waiting on a couple of my writing partners to get back to me before moving on. They are great,and I highly value their opnions, but I think a little more diversity would help my perspective.
So read the following, and if interested, pm me. I prefer to send the WIP in email. I will return the favor, if wanted, or you can just give me your thoughts and let me know if you want to join my little group.
Sophie Anderson has always known that she, Emily and Tasha were not normal. Best friends since grade school, they shared a love of the paranormal and science fiction was more science fact for them. Tasha could start fires just by thinking about it and Emily was a human lie detector. Sophie did not have any "special" talent, but there was a connection between the three of them that could not be denied. Keeping their powers secret from even their parents, they muddled through day to day life, unaware of their true heritage.
Sophie, out of work and at the end of her unemployment benefits, signs up for a free seminar. A coupon clipper and free sample junkie, she has no intention of actually joining the weight loss program, but a free steak dinner is too good to pass up, even if she has to answer a mile long questionnaire filled with the stupidest questions. The next day she is approached by a mysterious man and offered a unique opportunity. Travel to another planet, and help colonize it. She can even recruit others and get fringe benefits. An arm chair quarterback while watching reality shows, she sees it as an answer to her and her friend's problems. Tasha is in hock to a loan shark because she refuses to take money from her controlling parents. Emily is a doormat for the abusive husband her social climbing parents practically sold her to. If she can just convince them, and herself, that the offer is legit, they could disappear and start over.
The Colony Chronicles is the beginning trilogy of a dark epic fantasy soap opera. Combining several genres, it tells the story of Sophie and her friends, and several others as they travel to the world of Tellus, an Earthlike planet, filled with many surprises. Sophie will find out the truth about her mother's murder, and find her special talent. Tasha will discover a place to fit in, her 6'2" body not an oddity on Tellus, and learn to control her fire starting. Emily will learn she is much stronger than anyone knows, especially herself, and meets someone who teaches her that not all men are like her husband and father.
As they face adventure and adversity, the true story of why they are on Tellus will come to light.
TCC will have sword and sorcery and tech too. Romance is a big theme, but HEA's may not play out the way they usually do in standard romance fantasy.Politically incorrectness and humor, along with some erotic encounters and graphic violence will pop up from time to time, so be warned. Mythilogical creatures will look familiar on the outside, but inside, well, lets just say this ain't your standard fantasy and leave it at that.
I have several people I am currently exchanging work with, but I think a few more would give me a better picture of what direction my WIP needs to go.
I basically need some one to bounce ideas off of, and give me general opinions of the work overall, not line by line crits. I will deal with grammar and such once the first draft is done. Right now, I have a prologue--which needs alot of work-- and a first chapter. I am waiting on a couple of my writing partners to get back to me before moving on. They are great,and I highly value their opnions, but I think a little more diversity would help my perspective.
So read the following, and if interested, pm me. I prefer to send the WIP in email. I will return the favor, if wanted, or you can just give me your thoughts and let me know if you want to join my little group.
Sophie Anderson has always known that she, Emily and Tasha were not normal. Best friends since grade school, they shared a love of the paranormal and science fiction was more science fact for them. Tasha could start fires just by thinking about it and Emily was a human lie detector. Sophie did not have any "special" talent, but there was a connection between the three of them that could not be denied. Keeping their powers secret from even their parents, they muddled through day to day life, unaware of their true heritage.
Sophie, out of work and at the end of her unemployment benefits, signs up for a free seminar. A coupon clipper and free sample junkie, she has no intention of actually joining the weight loss program, but a free steak dinner is too good to pass up, even if she has to answer a mile long questionnaire filled with the stupidest questions. The next day she is approached by a mysterious man and offered a unique opportunity. Travel to another planet, and help colonize it. She can even recruit others and get fringe benefits. An arm chair quarterback while watching reality shows, she sees it as an answer to her and her friend's problems. Tasha is in hock to a loan shark because she refuses to take money from her controlling parents. Emily is a doormat for the abusive husband her social climbing parents practically sold her to. If she can just convince them, and herself, that the offer is legit, they could disappear and start over.
The Colony Chronicles is the beginning trilogy of a dark epic fantasy soap opera. Combining several genres, it tells the story of Sophie and her friends, and several others as they travel to the world of Tellus, an Earthlike planet, filled with many surprises. Sophie will find out the truth about her mother's murder, and find her special talent. Tasha will discover a place to fit in, her 6'2" body not an oddity on Tellus, and learn to control her fire starting. Emily will learn she is much stronger than anyone knows, especially herself, and meets someone who teaches her that not all men are like her husband and father.
As they face adventure and adversity, the true story of why they are on Tellus will come to light.
TCC will have sword and sorcery and tech too. Romance is a big theme, but HEA's may not play out the way they usually do in standard romance fantasy.Politically incorrectness and humor, along with some erotic encounters and graphic violence will pop up from time to time, so be warned. Mythilogical creatures will look familiar on the outside, but inside, well, lets just say this ain't your standard fantasy and leave it at that.