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ElizaFaith13

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I sent my YA Fantasy MS to my grandmother for some grammar help. She used to work for Time Warner when it was a newspaper. She also used to send back my e-mails with a spell & grammar check. I was a bit fearful of what she would say, but she surprised me, see below.

"Okay, so I started to read and edit at the same time. Then I got so hooked on the plot line I decided to just read it--no editing. Do you have any idea how hard that is for me???? Anyway, just finished it, and loved it. It does need polishing, maybe a lot of polishing. But the story's great. Really great."

I know no one else probably cares, but if my fancy grandma (who I'm not even allowed to call grandma) loved it, well I feel pretty darn good. ESPECIALLY, since Nathan Bransford recently posted on his blog the that he wants to see plot, plot, plot.
 

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That's fantastic--both the great feedback and an awesome grandma!
 

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Now ask Grandma to go back and finish editing.

And CGs!
 

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awww, that's so cool! in some ways, family is even harder to impress than a random stranger. Their judgements mean so much.