I should put to you what it is I need and see what you think about that. Then we can proceed as required and desired!
I write Military/Espionage, that is the best fit genre I have found so far. I have a Special Ops TEAM in the present day.
I am literately technically illiterate.
At 47 yo, I came to writing last November so writing is not my strongest suit and it has never been a burning desire nor passion. I am too old to learn much more than fetch and carry and I am getting slower and slower at those too.
#1 is 114k
#2 is 84k
These two are interchangeable and fully independent of each other, I was told that 114k was too long for a first work so I wrote #2, 84k, simple!
#3 is 104k, it should be read after #1 at the very least but, of course, can be read alone without reducing too much of the enjoyment.
#4 is purpose written for an eBook request. It is 28k, but they did ask for 50-60k. By 20k I had killed everyone and had to mortally wound the hero, who miraculously, survives, to extend it.
I haven't submitted this to the eBook yet, but I have warned him it is short and promised him 60k from #6 which will be another eBook.
Now, what do I need?
I need a partner, a technical wordsmith.
That I am not.
You need to be at least a little worldly, that translates to having been out of academia a minimum of half a dozen years. If you resent or don't understand that, experience is a damned hard word to learn and spell. I truly believe you shouldn't even try until 27/28 yo. Sorry, just the way I see it.
I do believe that I do write a damned good yarn. Not a lot of sex, not a lot of bad language, much callous violence, sometimes a bit too blood thirsty; I have been told by a grandmother friend of mine in the US. There is plenty of action, a modicum of intrigue occasionally and frequently bloody scenes of needless death. I guess you would need to read it to judge for yourself. It is what I perceive to be the necessary and desirable actions of a covert ops group in the present day.
#1 is set in N Africa
#2 is set in Afghanistan
#3 is set in Iraq
#4 is set in a 747.
I have about another dozen openings, generally chapter one which may be turned into full works, fobbed off as shortish stories, or abandoned. I still have room on my hard drive and little care for that space.
I am not sure that I would be of much use with my contributions to your work apart from the odd extra paragraph here or there, or maybe the odd radical idea. I do consider that I frequently see many things from a lot more than one POV, often way out in left field, if that be an appropriate term!
I did do that for another author when they sent me chaps 1-4 about gang girls in LA. It was way outa my league and I was lucky to understand even half of it, it seemed to be mostly in a foreign language to me, but I was able to suggest some twists and turns that had not been considered, the cops, graft, corruption, prostitution, stand over, armed holdups, burglary and robbery with general crime and mayhem.
The reply I got was wild, and they ran off swearing to add all this stuff to their work. I haven't heard back. Perhaps I never will.
Let me know how you FEEL about my post, ideas, current works and what works for you.
I have basically cross posted what I replied to a thread looking for a partner. Please don't think I am too lazy but once I have authored a considered piece, I find it very hard to improve, edit, or generally change much if anything at all. Part of my problem, or rustic charm, totally up to you to decide what!
A sense of humour must be present at all times. Sometimes I don't know if I was trying to be humourous or sarcastic.
Regards
I write Military/Espionage, that is the best fit genre I have found so far. I have a Special Ops TEAM in the present day.
I am literately technically illiterate.
At 47 yo, I came to writing last November so writing is not my strongest suit and it has never been a burning desire nor passion. I am too old to learn much more than fetch and carry and I am getting slower and slower at those too.
#1 is 114k
#2 is 84k
These two are interchangeable and fully independent of each other, I was told that 114k was too long for a first work so I wrote #2, 84k, simple!
#3 is 104k, it should be read after #1 at the very least but, of course, can be read alone without reducing too much of the enjoyment.
#4 is purpose written for an eBook request. It is 28k, but they did ask for 50-60k. By 20k I had killed everyone and had to mortally wound the hero, who miraculously, survives, to extend it.
I haven't submitted this to the eBook yet, but I have warned him it is short and promised him 60k from #6 which will be another eBook.
Now, what do I need?
I need a partner, a technical wordsmith.
That I am not.
You need to be at least a little worldly, that translates to having been out of academia a minimum of half a dozen years. If you resent or don't understand that, experience is a damned hard word to learn and spell. I truly believe you shouldn't even try until 27/28 yo. Sorry, just the way I see it.
I do believe that I do write a damned good yarn. Not a lot of sex, not a lot of bad language, much callous violence, sometimes a bit too blood thirsty; I have been told by a grandmother friend of mine in the US. There is plenty of action, a modicum of intrigue occasionally and frequently bloody scenes of needless death. I guess you would need to read it to judge for yourself. It is what I perceive to be the necessary and desirable actions of a covert ops group in the present day.
#1 is set in N Africa
#2 is set in Afghanistan
#3 is set in Iraq
#4 is set in a 747.
I have about another dozen openings, generally chapter one which may be turned into full works, fobbed off as shortish stories, or abandoned. I still have room on my hard drive and little care for that space.
I am not sure that I would be of much use with my contributions to your work apart from the odd extra paragraph here or there, or maybe the odd radical idea. I do consider that I frequently see many things from a lot more than one POV, often way out in left field, if that be an appropriate term!
I did do that for another author when they sent me chaps 1-4 about gang girls in LA. It was way outa my league and I was lucky to understand even half of it, it seemed to be mostly in a foreign language to me, but I was able to suggest some twists and turns that had not been considered, the cops, graft, corruption, prostitution, stand over, armed holdups, burglary and robbery with general crime and mayhem.
The reply I got was wild, and they ran off swearing to add all this stuff to their work. I haven't heard back. Perhaps I never will.
Let me know how you FEEL about my post, ideas, current works and what works for you.
I have basically cross posted what I replied to a thread looking for a partner. Please don't think I am too lazy but once I have authored a considered piece, I find it very hard to improve, edit, or generally change much if anything at all. Part of my problem, or rustic charm, totally up to you to decide what!
A sense of humour must be present at all times. Sometimes I don't know if I was trying to be humourous or sarcastic.
Regards