NEW CONTEST: The Inauguration Poem We Should've Had

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There's been good discussion about the poem read at President Obama's inauguration last week - and much (but not all) of the response was negative.

The question we'd like to pose to you is: If you'd been asked, how would you have responded?

Here's your challenge: Write your own Inaugural Poem. Assume it's in the current context -- you would have been invited to read it at Obama's inauguration. Therefore, the poem should be appropriate for the event (which can mean whatever you deem it to mean).

I'm still mulling the first prize; there will be at least one poetry book or recording as a prize. I'm going to shop around; I assure you that the prize will be one the winner will enjoy. (If there are more prizes, some will be assigned to minor placewinners.)

Each AW member can submit one entry, which must be his or her own work.

The only constraint on form is that the poem should be within three hundred words or fifty lines.

Post your entries to me via PM, by Sunday, February 15. The entries will be posted by Monday, February 16.

Voting will open on Tuesday, February 17 and close on Sunday, March 1.

I'll announce the voting rules when voting opens.

Please feel free to PM me with questions, or to discuss the contest here.

I hope you all enjoy the idea; we look forward to a fun contest and an active discussion!
 
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This is an awesome idea.
 

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Why this is such a good idea, and I don't mind saying this, I don't have a clue as to what the lady said who wrote the poem, and as much as I love to decipher metaphors, I thought it lacked, alot.... We'll show them....Great idea...
 

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i like this a lot. should be fun. a chance to be upbeat and positive about america.
 

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YES - we have our first entry.

I'm excited about this contest; I think it's going to draw some wonderful entries.
 

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I want to enter, but I think the challenge for me will be to go from internal, personal poems to broad sweeping poems. Fei =/ epic
 

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I want to enter, but I think the challenge for me will be to go from internal, personal poems to broad sweeping poems. Fei =/ epic

Then write an internal, personal poem. Just... make it universal in scope.
 

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Then write an internal, personal poem. Just... make it universal in scope.


Wow!! As simple as all that?

*mops up sarcasm

hee hee
 

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I'm going to write about the....oops. No clues. But I'm definitely including the...
 

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I'm going to write about the....oops. No clues. But I'm definitely including the...

I'm going to write about the cardinals, how cardinals are red, like my heart, and my love, for Obammmaaaaa

j/k no I'm not, yes I am, no.

You don't know, do you? I'm quick, like a ninja, like a blue jay.
 

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cardinals were in the trees
at the mall
that day.
were they not?
and hanging, also,
from their ancient windows.
but not the red ones,
the women...
heckling and dancing
but not red.
 

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cardinals were in the trees
at the mall
that day.
were they not?
and hanging, also,
from their ancient windows.
but not the red ones,
the women...
heckling and dancing
but not red.

The blue jays
crass and noisy
pecked at the roof
of the sky
till clouds split
and the shattering
the tinkling of rain glass
grounded them
wet them
and shamed them
each to each to silence.



we need a poem about white birds, then it'll be the united states of aviarica
 

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Hey, if that's all we are unhappy about--the inaug. poem--then all is right with the world. But I too had funny feelings about the poem and poet. My eyes rolled back or something. O.k., I've had a poem budding in my head ever since and will enter this, my first, poetry contest.
 

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This is a brilliant idea... that poem left the entire speech seeming a little bit off. I had taken the day off to watch it, and I was definitely not happy when that poem came up. I only hope I can come up with something, myself ^^'
 

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Hey, if that's all we are unhappy about--the inaug. poem--then all is right with the world.
Well put. The fact that a poem is part of the inauguration ceremony is a pretty fine thing in itself.
 

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cardinals were in the trees
at the mall
that day.
were they not?
and hanging, also,
from their ancient windows.
but not the red ones,
the women...
heckling and dancing
but not red.

Are you daft, man? The Cardinals are in Tampa Bay, preparing for the Super Bowl!
 

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The blue jays
crass and noisy
pecked at the roof
of the sky
till clouds split
and the shattering
the tinkling of rain glass
grounded them
wet them
and shamed them
each to each to silence.



we need a poem about white birds, then it'll be the united states of aviarica

White birds
enjoy Selassie
the black birds,
they kiss to be kind,
employ Selassie...
the birds of silver
shaft the sun
and burst to land
on hot tarmac steaming,
Selassie sings
Iron, Lion, Zion.
White birds print the sky,
remember the remember,
only Lincoln sits
to admire it all,
menagerie sky.
 

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Two entries already!