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Hello everyone, I'm very pleased with this site!
My question is that I've been having trouble with this story plot for quite some time now and I was wondering what anyones opinion would be on helping me make the right choice to go forward with it.
There's a part in my story that involves the hero when he was young that served his time as a child soldier in a dystopian future era. The main antagonist wants to control the mc and other kids for his army so he doesn't risk them rebeling agsinst him or be too self aware, like plan a retaliation against the antagonist. It may sound a little graphic and violent, if it is, I apologize.
My two options is the antagonist uses lots of drugs and methods of manipulation on the kids and mc for years so they don't end up as self aware as they get older. Or before they become soldiers the antagonist first has the mc and the kids brains transplanted into super strong cyborg bodies so he can maintain control of their young minds that will never grow older. Which option sounds most feasible?
And my other question is, since it's a school, in order for the antagonist to keep this child soldier transformation a cover up from the parents would it be plausible enough to have it that the antagonist cloned all the kids to send their cloned versions back to their parents so it's as if nothing happened while the real kids are kidnapped being turned to soldiers?
Thank you so much for anybody that can help me. I would really appreciate it.
My question is that I've been having trouble with this story plot for quite some time now and I was wondering what anyones opinion would be on helping me make the right choice to go forward with it.
There's a part in my story that involves the hero when he was young that served his time as a child soldier in a dystopian future era. The main antagonist wants to control the mc and other kids for his army so he doesn't risk them rebeling agsinst him or be too self aware, like plan a retaliation against the antagonist. It may sound a little graphic and violent, if it is, I apologize.
My two options is the antagonist uses lots of drugs and methods of manipulation on the kids and mc for years so they don't end up as self aware as they get older. Or before they become soldiers the antagonist first has the mc and the kids brains transplanted into super strong cyborg bodies so he can maintain control of their young minds that will never grow older. Which option sounds most feasible?
And my other question is, since it's a school, in order for the antagonist to keep this child soldier transformation a cover up from the parents would it be plausible enough to have it that the antagonist cloned all the kids to send their cloned versions back to their parents so it's as if nothing happened while the real kids are kidnapped being turned to soldiers?
Thank you so much for anybody that can help me. I would really appreciate it.
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