Yesterday's Last Line

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He presumed I wouldn’t. He was right: he didn’t know me.
 

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“Thank you,” he took a few hobbling steps, “cruel friend that you are.”
 

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Sanaa went into the city of her birth with renewed purpose.
 

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I caught of whiff of a peculiar rotting sweetness, sadly familiar. This was a person who did not wash and tried to cover it up.
 

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Harkook became the jewel of the Coependi Coast with its deep waters and sheltered harbor.
 

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Breca set her thumb over the wound and closed her eyes.
 

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He sighed again and took her purchase to the bathroom, where he flushed it down the toilet.
 
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As usual Darby was surrounded by a group of his ne’re-do-well friends, all on edge and taunting the weaker Marvin. At least thus far, they had not jumped in as Palmer and Brat wrestled and punched in the dust.
 
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You all are aware you're in the Erotica board's last line thread, right? I'd be delighted to add three more erotica writers to my collection, but I fear this is a slip-up.

My last line:
He moves the blind to peek in the direction of the Willards’ house and its over-the-top holiday decorations, brilliantly lit fourteen hours a day. “Snowing, not hard.”
 
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Okay, I wrote another scene.

You’re kind of pretty.
 

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I haven't written anything in forever, but I do purely love reading your last lines. Please continue!
 

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All these last lines are piquing my interest and giving me so many questions. There are so many possibilities when you take it out of context and you do not know what is being written.

I am adding a watch to this thread.
 
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