I stalled out approximately a quarter of the way through a novel. My protagonist is a self-aware gmo who has successfully escaped the lab only to be relocated by two of the employees. She is a naive "Orphan" archetype. Naive in the "lack of exposure/knowledge" sense.
She has to escape again, this time it will be easy once she manages to actually find the door. Then a fateful encounter with a human child. Once that happens, I am floundering as much as she is.
Character (and new species) trait includes an innate anxious nature countered by need for dopamine rewards. Those rewards can come from accomplishments as easily as from sugar. Self aware, close to humans, if not equal. Size constraints might make this a bit of poetic license, but it is fiction.
Is the inner conflict between her innate fearful/anxious nature and her "greed" enough? She wants a LOT. Mostly knowledge, but to gain that, she needs to learn to communicate. She trusts the child because she does not recognize her as human (naive about the environment/world) but initially sees all adults as "bad". The child is young enough to be learning written language herself, so she learns by first watching, then the pair find a way using written language along with gestures (point at tree, write tree) or drawings. The Protagonist will slowly learn to trust the humans in the community close to where the group was released.
How the heck did my Hero's Journey turn into a Coming of Age Story where the Protagonist is creating her own culture from the ground up while establishing diplomatic relations with another species? All within a dystopian society about a century in the future.
I have her general "Earth shattering" goal. I don't quite understand her personal goals after the transition. I think I am uneasy because there is no obvious consequence if she fails. If she fails, she doesn't get some things she needs, but that is the only downside she is seeing.
She has to escape again, this time it will be easy once she manages to actually find the door. Then a fateful encounter with a human child. Once that happens, I am floundering as much as she is.
Character (and new species) trait includes an innate anxious nature countered by need for dopamine rewards. Those rewards can come from accomplishments as easily as from sugar. Self aware, close to humans, if not equal. Size constraints might make this a bit of poetic license, but it is fiction.
Is the inner conflict between her innate fearful/anxious nature and her "greed" enough? She wants a LOT. Mostly knowledge, but to gain that, she needs to learn to communicate. She trusts the child because she does not recognize her as human (naive about the environment/world) but initially sees all adults as "bad". The child is young enough to be learning written language herself, so she learns by first watching, then the pair find a way using written language along with gestures (point at tree, write tree) or drawings. The Protagonist will slowly learn to trust the humans in the community close to where the group was released.
How the heck did my Hero's Journey turn into a Coming of Age Story where the Protagonist is creating her own culture from the ground up while establishing diplomatic relations with another species? All within a dystopian society about a century in the future.
I have her general "Earth shattering" goal. I don't quite understand her personal goals after the transition. I think I am uneasy because there is no obvious consequence if she fails. If she fails, she doesn't get some things she needs, but that is the only downside she is seeing.