I like this! The accent reminds me of Ygritte from Game of Thrones.
Here's mine. Context: Jonah has just stormed out of his abusive foster home, and found himself at Del's house, even though they've recently had a fight.
Not much of a kiss, but there you are. They do get a real one eventually, when he's more ready, but the scene isn't up to scratch yet :/
I like it. I like kissing scenes that are about more than just kissing. I like when something deeper is happening in the scene.