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"You find out, give me a holler, and I’ll come get ya—by the way, we cleaned up The ScareCrow."
(Special Agent Valentino Lucas code name Jaguar
A DEADLY SPILL OF SCARLET)
 
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"Each daughter was born with strong personalities, very fitting for what they were sent to accomplish."
Might change up the wording of strong and accomplish. It being the start of a new paragraph I want it to sound as impactful as possible
 

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"Lately she’d been feeling so jagged and brittle that she half-expected to find shards of herself scattered in the bathtub after she showered."
 

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The next thing I heard was Nicholas yelling, “I’M SICK OF YOUR GAMES!” It carried all the way from the reindeer shelter.
 
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“Nineteen years,” Mindy roared. “It’s been nineteen years, you-you tentacled...cutie!” She bent down, grabbed his face, and kissed him on the mouth. “I missed you so much.”

-------------------The Book of the Universe
 
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“You hired me to keep you safe, I can’t do that if you hide important information from me. I need to know where you’re keeping that thing or else thousands of people are going to die.”
 

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Mindy’s gaze didn’t leave Kathleen’s eyes, but her feeling cloud didn’t change from grey either. “And who took you in when the doctor hurt you? I did. Who took you in when your parents were too ashamed to? I did. Who moved you away from them? I did. And I will protect you, Kathleen.”
 

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*I worked on two WIPs yesterday*

“Okay, okay.” Loomie tapped one of the spaceship’s legs and a ramp lowered. ---- The Book of the Universe

The sound of little boys’ laughter pounded in Trumaine's ears. ----Tap
 

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"The young man looked back towards the beach, to see the other man making his way slowly towards the boat again. He bellowed at him, but the words were whipped away by the increasingly ferocious wind."
 

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Pen set down her teacup with a trembling hand. “So Joe the plumber put on a pirate outfit and stole your RV, which was full of illegal drugs that you got from a Catholic priest—"
 
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He showed the text to Audrin and Casper. “Guys look. A UFO crashed in the Scrapyard. We have to go there after school."

---------------Aliens in the Scrapyard
 

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Asudden, Harry backed away from me and tore for the trees, and I took off after him.
(A DEADLY SPILL OF SCARLET)
 

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“Yes, Julio,” Uncle Boone grasped his arm. “Go to the Scrapyard. You must protect it. Get your friends and save the world.”

--------------------Aliens in the Scrapyard
 

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He puffed out his chest. “Maybe I’ll go find that sleeping monster myself. What do ya say, Dipper. Wanta come?”

---------------------Protectors of the Scrapyard

Wattson was alive and that was all that mattered at the moment.

--------------------Tap
 

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It was on day whatever during one of these plotting sessions that a high screeching noise sounded through the busy Dollhouse. ---Puppet People
 

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It did reflect her effort, some the denial of grief, some deliberate, to remain detached, numb to the world around her.
 

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