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"You find out, give me a holler, and I’ll come get ya—by the way, we cleaned up The ScareCrow."
(Special Agent Valentino Lucas code name Jaguar
A DEADLY SPILL OF SCARLET)
 
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"Each daughter was born with strong personalities, very fitting for what they were sent to accomplish."
Might change up the wording of strong and accomplish. It being the start of a new paragraph I want it to sound as impactful as possible
 

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"Lately she’d been feeling so jagged and brittle that she half-expected to find shards of herself scattered in the bathtub after she showered."
 

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The next thing I heard was Nicholas yelling, “I’M SICK OF YOUR GAMES!” It carried all the way from the reindeer shelter.
 
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“Nineteen years,” Mindy roared. “It’s been nineteen years, you-you tentacled...cutie!” She bent down, grabbed his face, and kissed him on the mouth. “I missed you so much.”

-------------------The Book of the Universe
 

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“You hired me to keep you safe, I can’t do that if you hide important information from me. I need to know where you’re keeping that thing or else thousands of people are going to die.”
 

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Mindy’s gaze didn’t leave Kathleen’s eyes, but her feeling cloud didn’t change from grey either. “And who took you in when the doctor hurt you? I did. Who took you in when your parents were too ashamed to? I did. Who moved you away from them? I did. And I will protect you, Kathleen.”
 

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