Query letters and book proposals for memoirists

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For memoirists looking for sample query letters and book proposals, here are some useful resources. (Not an exhaustive list, just some hard-to-find resources that helped me.)​


Jane Friedman's Business of Writing

Query letter examples
Book proposal examples
  • Matched (memoir) by Denise Massar; the proposal secured a literary agent — PDF download
Suzy Evans book proposal for her memoir MACHIAVELLI FOR MOMS

Eric Smith Successful Queries
 
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Thanks so much for this! Do you know if all memoir now require a proposal? I've heard before that because memoir is written like fiction that it's published without proposal?
 
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Thanks so much for this! Do you know if all memoir now require a proposal? I've heard before that because memoir is written like fiction that it's published without proposal?
It seems highly subjective depending on the agent and the nature of the memoir. I don't understand why so many agents lack concrete requirements for memoir submissions. I'm querying with a proposal now and a 30k word sample. There's a lot of misinformation about memoirs and the more I research, the more I find agents both accepting memoirs by proposal and even suggesting they won't take a full manuscript. I have at least six agents in my sub list who do accept proposals. The answers are scarce, but they're out there.
 

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And Laurie Dennison at CMA Lit - she mentioned it in a podcast episode.
 
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Thanks so much for this. Can I ask about your proposal? Is it heavily focused on your 'platform'? I understand the proposal will also include things like a synposis, sample chapters, etc, but the main purpose now appears to be your ability/channels to sell your work?
Yes, platform is the personalised feedback I'm getting.

From the research I've done and professionals I've engaged, platform for memoirists is not about likes and followers, but moreso about getting your stories read by the target audience. So, focus heavily on getting essays submitted to periodicals and/or speaking on podcasts that reach readers. It's all about proving proof of concept and having an interested readership.

I hope that helps.
 
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Tonight I made my first guest appearance on a podcast. I was so nervous, I puffed on a bottle of oxygen before the show, and it went far better than I could ever have hoped. I'll be re-sending queries as I build my platform, and I'll keep this thread updated with feedback/results.
 

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Yes, platform is the personalised feedback I'm getting.

From the research I've done and professionals I've engaged, platform for memoirists is not about likes and followers, but moreso about getting your stories read by the target audience. So, focus heavily on getting essays submitted to periodicals and/or speaking on podcasts that reach readers. It's all about proving proof of concept and having an interested readership.

I hope that helps.
That helps tremendously! Hope you share the podcast when it's out.
 

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Tonight I made my first guest appearance on a podcast. I was so nervous, I puffed on a bottle of oxygen before the show, and it went far better than I could ever have hoped. I'll be re-sending queries as I build my platform, and I'll keep this thread updated with feedback/results.
Oh, how wonderful! Congratulations! That is absolutely splendid. And, yes, please do keep us updated. We want to cheer you on!
 

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Aw, thank you for your lovely comments! I guess it went well because I've been invited back to speak on another topic. I'm having aftershocks—overanalysing everything I said wrong, could’ve, should’ve, etc. I'm really pleased I went ahead with it, though. I'll be sure to post links when it's released in about two weeks. I won’t listen to it, of course.

I’m sending out a fresh round of queries today with my new bio and platform-building efforts. I’m not expecting it to be enough, but I’m an A/B tester who can’t resist dipping my toes in the water. I’m also planning to dedicate the next month writing and pitching essays to periodicals, then get more experience with podcasts.

On a side note, I found an agent on Bluesky doing an AMA for the day. I asked if my memoir matched her requirements for fiction, would she consider my query. She said yes, so I immediately personalised my query based on her go-ahead. It was a rejection because of platform, but she took the time to give me personalised feedback:

"Great title! There is a lot that I find interesting here. I think this topic is fascinating, and you have addressed an interesting niche within the topic."

So, my ghosts have taken on human form at last. It's progress.
 
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Another rejection from a week ago. Sharing is caring and all that.

"I like your book idea and I think it has potential. I wish I could pursue representation, but unfortunately the large publishers with whom I work require a more fully-developed platform. I encourage you to continue building. It isn't about promoting yourself, but about connecting with your target reader. I would advise taking time to share your message, at which time you could have a shot at a major publisher."

I suspect that's a targeted form rejection, though hard to say for sure. Still, it has some great pointers worth noting.
 
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