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I've decided to cause the least amount of confusion possible by deleting this post and instead will turn your attention to the link in Brightdreamer's post below. Since that is were I should have posted this before hand I do sincerely apologize for any confusion I have caused and do hope that I can get this mistake corrected soon.
 
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Hi!

This really isn't the place for detailed plot feedback... you might want to head over to the Brainstorming Sandbox subforum (password is vista).

In general, ideas are a dime a dozen; it's the execution that makes or breaks a story. Reincarnated gods/gods in modern times are almost a subgenre of their own, IMHO - which is good insofar as you have comparison titles and a good audience base, but it does mean you need to step up and bring your A-game if you want to stand out.

Good luck!
 

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Hi!

This really isn't the place for detailed plot feedback... you might want to head over to the Brainstorming Sandbox subforum (password is vista).

In general, ideas are a dime a dozen; it's the execution that makes or breaks a story. Reincarnated gods/gods in modern times are almost a subgenre of their own, IMHO - which is good insofar as you have comparison titles and a good audience base, but it does mean you need to step up and bring your A-game if you want to stand out.

Good luck!

Ah ok. I'll get this over there immediately then. Thanks for the feedback. P.S. I will say though that this story actually doesn't take place in modern day. It's set in an alternate 13th century just to make things more interesting... I hope at least.
 

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