- Feb 15, 2009
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I'm writing something that could be a long chapter or even an entire book, I think, but despite the number of things I'm talking about, it's turning out shorter than I thought it would be. I can't tell if I'm talking about too many things too quickly. I'm not sure how to go in depth without adding unnecessary info, and I'm not sure if I'm packing what I do have too densely. Would someone please offer some guidance? I've written almost exclusively (bad) fiction for ~20 years and feel like I don't have a good handle on what I'm doing.