Last line of the day - NaNo 2019

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You worked hard all day to get to that line! Share it here!
 

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If I had, maybe my zaza wouldn't have come up with this ridiculous idea.
 

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Ella nodded, and Letitia's gaze flickered a moment – in disappointment – before she sweetly wished her sister a good morning.
 

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"Ah!" Ma cries. "I know him! That's my orchids supplier!"
We all look down at the body in the cooler, his face frozen in a silent scream.
"Tsk. He gave me good price for orchids. You know how hard it is to get orchids for cheap?"
 

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[FONT=&quot]Dwayne grimaced to himself. He needed to find an opening to head her off, preferably in the wrong direction.[/FONT]
 

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Mr Wilder smiled, realisation rushing to his face. “How could I ever forget you, Zuri?”
 

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I guess by that logic, everything that happened afterwards was his fault.
 

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It won't be love or lust, but that person will have to be okay with that.
 

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“You’ll do no such thing. No hitting.”
 

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Springing off of a nearby car, Nixe flung herself into the growing white void, feeling the world behind her and anyone who might have been pursuing her slip away.
 

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The rabbit-girl, clad in a toga-like garment and sporting a spiralling horn along with her petite nose and floppy ears, tumbled along the ground until she crashed into a snow-covered hedge.
 

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"The festival day was over."

I pushed to almost midnight to finish Chapter 1!
 

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Well. That was incredibly weaksauce. I can’t believe he caved so completely so quickly. Can’t wait to hear what Mom has to say when that happens.
 

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"Robbie’s been restless for a while now – tired of his lessons and his flock and his garden, bored by council meetings and military drills – and I feared time with Barran might push him over the edge into outright discontent, if not rebellion.”
 

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"Sure."

:thankyou:

(Wow. I don't know where that came from. Somewhere deep in the depths of my creative soul, I'm guessing. I'm completely overwhelmed. That line alone took everything out of me and I have to get to bed now.)
 

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"That’s when I moved the whole exercise downwind of the midden, and made the children and knights and everyone else dismount and join in, just to have a little peace.”

My FMC, on dealing with inattentive troops, gossiping knights and fractious family members.
 

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