Day 3 was 28 marked pages reviewed (GB, round 2), some attempts at adding descriptions, 4 agents queried, and 1 nudge (plus 2 rejections)
If nothing else, I got through the remaining marked pages on my second pass. However, I'd really wanted to also take care of slotting in some descriptions. I think I might've found an alright place to describe the trouble-making friend on page 3 (after waffling over describing him on page 1). Then I was also debating on whether to add a description for the cowardly friend on the first page, but hesitated and now I've also been reconsidering the brief reference on the third page. No idea where or when I might describe the other friend.
On the agent front, I CNR'd an agent who didn't respond to an October query, only to realize she'd been pretty fast to respond to my other queries and she mentioned you could nudge after 8 weeks, so I did that... after already sending a new query. I still haven't nudged the full again. I might wait on that until I start sending out GB queries in a few weeks.
As for the research/comp, good lord, this book is slow-moving. There's been relatively little spooky stuff happening and all of the other drama / side-plots are seriously padding the story.
However, I suppose my expectations were different, too. I re-read the GR description and realize that technically it wasn't promising that kids TODAY were vanishing, just that the threat could vanish kids... and technically it hadn't been vanishing them, they were just drowning in a pond. (The exact verbiage is "The Caretaker is an evil ghost who lures unsuspecting kids into the neighborhood pond. . . and they don’t ever come out.") So far, exactly zero of the current children have been affected in any way, although the MC is just learning about the previous victims. At any rate, the threat is way too distant. And the supernatural events have been pretty thin. (Although one thing that might've added a bit of intrigue I semi-spoiled for myself via the acknowledgments page, which suggests a guardian jaguar..)
I mean, TECHNICALLY the story still has a threat that's been impacting children for decades, so that part still works. And I'm a bit desperate for comps, even if the number of GR ratings isn't huge (although it's alright for MG. In fact, I can't think of any recent MG horror that's had a lot of ratings, minus maybe something by an absurdly established author like R.L. Stine.)
Currently at 130 marked pages reviewed (GB, round 2) -- FINISHED (kinda)
Queried 5 agents so far this month. -- +4
Currently 131 pages into a research/comp (Angela Cervantes's MG horror The Cursed Moon)
If nothing else, I got through the remaining marked pages on my second pass. However, I'd really wanted to also take care of slotting in some descriptions. I think I might've found an alright place to describe the trouble-making friend on page 3 (after waffling over describing him on page 1). Then I was also debating on whether to add a description for the cowardly friend on the first page, but hesitated and now I've also been reconsidering the brief reference on the third page. No idea where or when I might describe the other friend.
On the agent front, I CNR'd an agent who didn't respond to an October query, only to realize she'd been pretty fast to respond to my other queries and she mentioned you could nudge after 8 weeks, so I did that... after already sending a new query. I still haven't nudged the full again. I might wait on that until I start sending out GB queries in a few weeks.
As for the research/comp, good lord, this book is slow-moving. There's been relatively little spooky stuff happening and all of the other drama / side-plots are seriously padding the story.
However, I suppose my expectations were different, too. I re-read the GR description and realize that technically it wasn't promising that kids TODAY were vanishing, just that the threat could vanish kids... and technically it hadn't been vanishing them, they were just drowning in a pond. (The exact verbiage is "The Caretaker is an evil ghost who lures unsuspecting kids into the neighborhood pond. . . and they don’t ever come out.") So far, exactly zero of the current children have been affected in any way, although the MC is just learning about the previous victims. At any rate, the threat is way too distant. And the supernatural events have been pretty thin. (Although one thing that might've added a bit of intrigue I semi-spoiled for myself via the acknowledgments page, which suggests a guardian jaguar..)
I mean, TECHNICALLY the story still has a threat that's been impacting children for decades, so that part still works. And I'm a bit desperate for comps, even if the number of GR ratings isn't huge (although it's alright for MG. In fact, I can't think of any recent MG horror that's had a lot of ratings, minus maybe something by an absurdly established author like R.L. Stine.)
Currently at 130 marked pages reviewed (GB, round 2) -- FINISHED (kinda)
Queried 5 agents so far this month. -- +4
Currently 131 pages into a research/comp (Angela Cervantes's MG horror The Cursed Moon)