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Did I have the ability to make him look up at me just by thinking extraneous, incredibly long, and randomly pointless and pointlessly random thoughts at him?
 

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He shouts at me, “Don’t!” and steals the dagger back, but the damage is already done.
 

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I pressed my lips against her forehead, so that she did not progress this friendship of ours further down a forbidden path. I sensed her disappointment from how she lingered while holding my hands. She was in love with me, and it pained me to know that she was on a path of heartbreak.
 

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We’ll have opportunities to talk. Opportunities to rebuild trust.
We have time.
 

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I folded my paws under my body and sat like a loaf of bread.
 

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Abel can’t push the wheelbarrow five feet without one of our six horses ducking through the pasture fence to steal a mouthful of hay.
 

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"Don't worry, Kyle. He's only more complicated than your average gay, pseudo punker attending Catholic high school than you'd realize."
 

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