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Editing for authors: because every writer needs a good editor.

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Deepthought

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I wrote the poem. I like Roald Dahl's style, and I added a bit of Calvin and Hobbes there, the way a child sees the world.
As for other contests, there doesn't need to be a prize (it's an incentive for sure) I just do it to share my work, it's great fun, and I love to compete!
 

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I wrote #1, Breath in the Air. I think I might submit it to SYW and get some feedback.

By the way, I'm always up for another challenge.
 

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I wrote #1, Breath in the Air. I think I might submit it to SYW and get some feedback.

By the way, I'm always up for another challenge.


I liked it. The punch towards the end came out of the blue.
 

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I wrote #1, Breath in the Air. I think I might submit it to SYW and get some feedback.

By the way, I'm always up for another challenge.
That got a vote from me. 100% dialogue; not a lot of words, but many possible implications. Got under my skin somehow.

It'd make a good short radio piece. I'd turn off the lights and listen in the dark.
 

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I liked it. The punch towards the end came out of the blue.


That got a vote from me. 100% dialogue; not a lot of words, but many possible implications. Got under my skin somehow.

It'd make a good short radio piece. I'd turn off the lights and listen in the dark.


Thank you both. I really appreciate the kind words for the piece. I'm glad it had an impact.
 
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