Cinquain Train

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Editing for authors: because every writer needs a good editor.

A. Hamilton

here for a minute...catch me?
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get lost
walk in circles
keep eyes closed for balance
chase your tail like a kitten
now drop
 

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but bring color to mind:
lemons, sun dried blue-bonnets and
red barns
 
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red barns
paint our landscape
drifting misting river
I draw a sharp breath seeing your
red barns
 

poetinahat

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red barns
keep the rain off
the leatherbacked old cows
mashing hay like chaw into cud
more rain
 

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Maybe
I'll remember
The smell of gasoline.
Nicotine; a farmer's field of tall corn.
Bye, punk.
 
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kborsden

Has a few recurring issues
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bye, punk
with your spiked hair
and tight leather jacket
your drain-pipe jeans with many zips
for good
 

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For good
or for evil.
we all stand together
for a cause we don't understand.
For life.
 

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for life
given without
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and capable participants,
struggles.
 

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struggles
become snuggles
I gaze at your zipper
we roll over newly mowed hay
hey you!
 

LimeyDawg

Scars are poems too
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Really
Told your last lie?
Well, forgive my mistrust
Only God offers forgiveness
Liar
 

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Liar
play your mouth out
till all your truths of life
spill into memories of love
destroyed​