Cinquain Train

[Rivana]

Faithful
to the night life,
they fail to seize the day
But those who fall will rise again
stronger

 

[Rivana]

Hard won
is this our fate,
but the years are worth it
For all our troubles we will grow
stronger

 

[Dee]

Stronger
And stronger still
Says my soul in the night
Speaking of love for only you
Passion

 

[Godfather]

passion
red red red lips
mad curves, crazy, red dress
and the eyes, and the breasts, the a$s...
Don't Touch.

 

[moblues]

Don't touch
nor speak to me.
You'll never deserve me,
you will never break my stone heart.
Goodbye.

 

[Godfather]

goodbye
babylon, sing.
one guitar, one drumkit,
drowning in the blues they are the
black keys!


(check out the black keys - great band)

 

[Rivana]

black keys
lead to black hearts
you cannot open love
if you try to force yourself in
hate kills

 

[aspier]

Floodlights
Bathe shy faces
In a crude dazzle splash.
Frightened men hunch and wail, helpless.
Dogs bark.

This is good, Poetinhat. Not fun at all but diamond stuff. See what I mean?

(Pssst sorry that I don't participate ... I always falls out of the boat when I 'force' poetry!)

 

[moblues]

Hate kills
innocents die.
Gods play chess games
pawns march on to the promised land.
Gods lie.

 

[Godfather]

gods lie
and we just stand
hangin' around, cryin'
not much more we can do, always
cryin'

 

[moblues]

Cryin'
ain't never helped.
Spit, toil and motor oil
Is how I feed my family.
I failed.

 

[moblues]

I failed
the soil is burnt.
Mother earth laughs at me
I'd sell my soul to feed my kids.
Let me.





Edit. I can't believe I did the eight sylabble line twice. LOL

 

[Dee]

Let me
I beg of you
Bring you closer this night
And touch my skin against your skin
Lips meet

 

[Godfather]

lips meet,
and rain pours down
in a great dramatic
closing scene. pity nobodie's
like that

 

[Dee]

Like that
Like this and that
I'm tired of all the fuss
Style is always changing anyway
Who knows

 

[Dee]

Like that
Like this and that
I'm tired of all the fuss
Style is always changing anyway
Who knows

 

[Ganesha]

Who knows
what they may think
or when they wrote the thought
written with invisible ink
thoughtless

 

[pconsidine]

Thoughtless
action curses
us to relive mistakes
as if tomorrow counts for naught.
Fools reign.

 

[moblues]

Fools reign
angels waver.
Death takes a holiday
while Dante just sits back and laughs.
Who wins?

 

[moblues]

Who wins?
Forget your sins
I am here to save you.
God? He's only a pretender.
Love me.

 

[Dee]

Love me
I want to say
But it sounds so selfish
One should not have to ask these things
Ever

 

[Ganesha]

Ever
aft forever
followed by never aft
joie de vie- my eyes upon thee
joyous​

 

[poetinahat]

joyous
you smell of soap
we eat cinnamon toast
measure the sunrise in coffee
kiss me

 

[kborsden]

kiss me
and make it quick
don't forget, mouth open
and slip your tongue between my lips
please do

 

[moblues]

Please do?
No please do not.
Who's life am I living?
I'm not here to amuse you, dear
Get lost.