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Dee

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Stronger
And stronger still
Says my soul in the night
Speaking of love for only you
Passion
 

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Don't touch
nor speak to me.
You'll never deserve me,
you will never break my stone heart.
Goodbye.
 

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goodbye
babylon, sing.
one guitar, one drumkit,
drowning in the blues they are the
black keys!


(check out the black keys - great band)
 

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poetinahat said:
Floodlights
Bathe shy faces
In a crude dazzle splash.
Frightened men hunch and wail, helpless.
Dogs bark.


This is good, Poetinhat. Not fun at all but diamond stuff. See what I mean?

(Pssst sorry that I don't participate ... I always falls out of the boat when I 'force' poetry!)
 
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Hate kills
innocents die.
Gods play chess games
pawns march on to the promised land.
Gods lie.
 

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Cryin'
ain't never helped.
Spit, toil and motor oil
Is how I feed my family.
I failed.
 

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I failed
the soil is burnt.
Mother earth laughs at me
I'd sell my soul to feed my kids.
Let me.





Edit. I can't believe I did the eight sylabble line twice. LOL
 
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Let me
I beg of you
Bring you closer this night
And touch my skin against your skin
Lips meet
 

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Like that
Like this and that
I'm tired of all the fuss
Style is always changing anyway
Who knows
 

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Like that
Like this and that
I'm tired of all the fuss
Style is always changing anyway
Who knows
 

Ganesha

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Who knows
what they may think
or when they wrote the thought
written with invisible ink
thoughtless
 

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Fools reign
angels waver.
Death takes a holiday
while Dante just sits back and laughs.
Who wins?
 

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Who wins?
Forget your sins
I am here to save you.
God? He's only a pretender.
Love me.
 

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Love me
I want to say
But it sounds so selfish
One should not have to ask these things
Ever
 

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you smell of soap
we eat cinnamon toast
measure the sunrise in coffee
kiss me
 

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Please do?
No please do not.
Who's life am I living?
I'm not here to amuse you, dear
Get lost.
 

Elizabeth George's book Write Away