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And showofferish
is how I describe myself -
a man with no bounds.
 

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Here's the missing link...:) :

date with a cheapskate
takes me to a dollar flick
won't buy me popcorn :(



rich said:
Won't buy me popcorn

Figures he paid for the flick

No loving tonight
 

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no loving tonight
boring date puts me to sleep
he's left with his dreams
 

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dog-eared pages--I. . .
take as a sign that the book
was a well-loved friend
 

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dog eared pages I
lovingly touch to remind
me of stories past.

Hmmm.. Ok..

Was a well loved friend
really just a friend or a
dream fulfilled in flesh?
 
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dream fulfilled in flesh?
something I've wanted all day:
burger with the works!
 

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burger with the works...
can't remember the last time
I had one of those
 

rich

I had one of those

Bitter, when I was thinking...

Sweet--life's changing mood.
 

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hormonal flashes
transform a friend's smile into
purple fantasies
 

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purple fantasies...
meadow filled with irisis,
California wine.

Sometime ago, now
I made that post and then this one
for our haiku chain
 
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for our haiku chain
I would write short poetry
though I don't like to
 

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Yes. You are perfect.
Handsome, urbane, and wealthy.
Still, you are alone.
 

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Still. You are alone.
in a house-ful that's sleeping;
stillness is soul food.


*I changed the punctuation of the carry-over line to change the meaning a bit.
 

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Stillness is soul food
"Be still and know I am God"
Listen to whispers
 
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Toward white silence
conscience stirs inward noise
I succumb to it.
 

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