when you created something that resonates so clearly with you... something not real... that you actually want to experience it? I don't know how to explain what I'm thinking? I don't want you to think I'm just being vain about something I wrote... that's not it. I'm sure it's not great. I'm sure it could use a re-write. But sometimes when I'm going through my work and reading I catch something I wrote and think, "Man... I wish I could hear/see/touch/etc that"... or "Man... I wish I could go there!"
I just had one of those moments. I will copy/paste my example here. This is what I read:
About ten months after our first visit to the cottage, Teal’s next album was released. The songs on it were mostly written during our stay. What he created during the mornings in his hammock and the evenings by the bonfire eventually became known as On Paudash Lake – Songs from the North. But I knew them first. I knew them as whispers in the night as I fell asleep, and as background music that washed over me while I fished the depths of that perfect lake. The songs were like ghosts to me when we gathered round the turntable and listened to the album for the first time.
I want to buy that album. Writing about it... about its inception... I know the whole thing. I have titles for each song (though I didn't write them into the story). I came across this passage and I thought, "damn... I want that."
Do you ever make something just so vividly real (IN YOUR OWN MIND, THAT IS), that you want to experience it? Feel free to include sample passages.
(**I believe I posted this in the correct forum?**)
About ten months after our first visit to the cottage, Teal’s next album was released. The songs on it were mostly written during our stay. What he created during the mornings in his hammock and the evenings by the bonfire eventually became known as On Paudash Lake – Songs from the North. But I knew them first. I knew them as whispers in the night as I fell asleep, and as background music that washed over me while I fished the depths of that perfect lake. The songs were like ghosts to me when we gathered round the turntable and listened to the album for the first time.
I want to buy that album. Writing about it... about its inception... I know the whole thing. I have titles for each song (though I didn't write them into the story). I came across this passage and I thought, "damn... I want that."
Do you ever make something just so vividly real (IN YOUR OWN MIND, THAT IS), that you want to experience it? Feel free to include sample passages.
(**I believe I posted this in the correct forum?**)