Craig, the music really was nice then WHAM! Sorry, but I think cannons rock. Could have been a bit longer with some more info. I'm impressed, because I wouldn't know how to do something like this. One thing I noticed- there was some switching between Sims-like stuff and real stuff (the pictures of the ranch houses). Might be better to stick to one type of visual. The houses looked like an offhand photo. Maybe show a dinner table and a family eating and laughing instead before the big blowup? Just make it more human. As for the sound...bring the loud items down just a bit. Compress everything with a multi band compressor and normalize to -3db. Otherwise, you're onto something good.