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Hey guys,
I REALLY need help with the opening for my query letter, I'm really pleased with the rest of it, but know that my opening is horrible! So, could y'all please tell me what you think I could do to fix it?
Thanks!
Dear (name)
I am seeking representation for my Young Adult novel entitiled (name), which is complete at approximately 215 pages. This is a simultaneous submission.
I REALLY need help with the opening for my query letter, I'm really pleased with the rest of it, but know that my opening is horrible! So, could y'all please tell me what you think I could do to fix it?
Thanks!
Dear (name)
I am seeking representation for my Young Adult novel entitiled (name), which is complete at approximately 215 pages. This is a simultaneous submission.