Ellipsis...is there an alternative

Good to know; always wondered about that.
But how about if the ellipsis comes at the end of the story?
Is it okay to omit the period, then, to give an added sense of the action continuing on?
(I just used this in a story that ends with the characters about to get romantic, leaving it up to the readers to fill in what happens next.)

and then they went into the bedroom...

AP Stylebook says the ellipsis should be used to indicate the deletion of one or more words in condensing quotes, texts and documents. AP adds that the dash should be used for pauses or abrupt changes in thought. (P. 330 and 331)

I've used the ellipsis for both and have seen other style guides that say it's fine. However, I like AP.

jst5150 said:

AP Stylebook says the ellipsis should be used to indicate the deletion of one or more words in condensing quotes, texts and documents. AP adds that the dash should be used for pauses or abrupt changes in thought. (P. 330 and 331)

I've used the ellipsis for both and have seen other style guides that say it's fine. However, I like AP.

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The thing to keep in mind is that AP (love it as I do) was intended for Associated Press newswriters. Generally, newswriters aren't expected to put in the pauses and such of the people they are quoting. (Although perhaps this is more accepted now that newswriting has gone all soft, fluffy and blatantly non-objective - IMHO.)

Books on fiction writing caution against the overuse of ellipsis to indicated pauses in speech, mainly because it gets cloying after a while to read the dialogue of frequently hesitant speakers. Breaking up the speech with bits of action that show hesitation rather than ... tell it is often a good alternative.

It needs four because it's the end of the sentence regardless of how much is omitted in the trailing off, although only the editor is going to be the least bit concerned as to how many dots finish off a story.

[By the way, Mumut, re the caption, ellipsis is the singular of ellipses.]

anis said:

Good to know; always wondered about that.
But how about if the ellipsis comes at the end of the story?
Is it okay to omit the period, then, to give an added sense of the action continuing on?
(I just used this in a story that ends with the characters about to get romantic, leaving it up to the readers to fill in what happens next.)

and then they went into the bedroom...

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Good question. I'm glad this thread was started because I have a character I'm struggling with. He just learned he can talk, so of course he talks slow. I try to limit the ... as much as I can and still show his hesitation when trying new words. I use a dash every once in a while, but then again, I am still trying not to over do it.

I don't think talking slow is the best reason for using an ellipsis. Simply somehow let me know he thinks about what he's going to say before he says it and then delivers it deliberately or whatever. Shorter sentences. I'll follow.

The ellipsis use in this case may, as you suspect, irritate if used too much, or wrongly indicate an interpretation other than simply talking slowly.

czjaba said:

Good question. I'm glad this thread was started because I have a character I'm struggling with. He just learned he can talk, so of course he talks slow. I try to limit the ... as much as I can and still show his hesitation when trying new words. I use a dash every once in a while, but then again, I am still trying not to over do it.

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