- Joined
- Jul 1, 2007
- Messages
- 491
- Reaction score
- 147
- Location
- small town in Michigan
- Website
- www.myspace.com
I am submitting a short story to the "Voices of Caregiving'" book put out by LaChance Publishing. I would like to have someone read it before I submit it, I have until next Friday to submit.
I have a problem with comma usage so that is one thing you will have to look for. Other then that I'm not looking for anything specific, just looking for opinions.
I have done the best I can with it and would appreciate any help to improve it. I plan on taking one more look at it tonight and then I think it's ready.
I have a problem with comma usage so that is one thing you will have to look for. Other then that I'm not looking for anything specific, just looking for opinions.
I have done the best I can with it and would appreciate any help to improve it. I plan on taking one more look at it tonight and then I think it's ready.