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burgy61
02-24-2008, 08:38 AM
I am submitting a short story to the "Voices of Caregiving'" book put out by LaChance Publishing. I would like to have someone read it before I submit it, I have until next Friday to submit.

I have a problem with comma usage so that is one thing you will have to look for. Other then that I'm not looking for anything specific, just looking for opinions.

I have done the best I can with it and would appreciate any help to improve it. I plan on taking one more look at it tonight and then I think it's ready.

burgy61
03-01-2008, 12:06 AM
I would like to thank Marie Pacha and RebeccaW for taking the time to help me with this story. Their help and suggestions have made this a better story and I even learned a couple of things.

RebeccaW
03-01-2008, 07:13 PM
I was happy to help, Mike. :) Good luck with your submission!