Start and Finish

Suprswimmer · Feb 9, 2008

This is a competition, I've never made one before so bare with me on this. You have to wait for every 3posts to write a new entry for it.
It's 100 words every entry, go off of this sentence:

"Jamie!" she shouted, yelling for me to stop. I couldn't stop, this was my destiny. I looked farther down the rocky cliff, the waves laped up onto the shore....

NOTE:
I see this as being a girl with a slight mental disorder, but whatever floats your boat...

Puma · Feb 9, 2008

Superswimmer - there's another forum, accessible from the main board, for contests, games, etc. Your post belongs there, not here in Share Your Work (critique and comments on works in progress). Puma

Suprswimmer · Feb 9, 2008

Start-Finish//Paragraph Game!

This is a competition, I've never made one before so bare with me on this. You have to wait for every 3posts to write a new entry for it.
It's 100 words every entry, go off of this sentence:

"Jamie!" she shouted, yelling for me to stop. I couldn't stop, this was my destiny. I looked farther down the rocky cliff, the waves laped up onto the shore....

NOTE:
I see this as being a girl with a slight mental disorder, but whatever floats your boat...

dpaterso · Feb 10, 2008

Yep, no harm done, but moving thread from SYW Mainstream to Writing Exercises, Prompts, and Games where it probably belongs.

-Derek

Matera the Mad · Feb 10, 2008

Hokay...but could you fix your spelling?

...like thirsty dogs. I knew it was now or never. I spread my wings - and flew! Straight out over the great ocean my wings bore me. At last I truly knew what it was to be a seagull. Clumsy at first, I soon mastered the art of balancing on the fickle air currents. With what I hoped was a dash of panache, I made a wide turn and soared back toward the cliff where my nestmates waited. They crowded together, beaks open, chattering amongst themselves as they watched my daring solo.

"Come on out," I called, "the air's fine!"

Pthom · Feb 12, 2008

There's no sense in having two of these--so I merged the threads.

Start and Finish

Suprswimmer

Puma

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Suprswimmer

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Matera the Mad

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Pthom

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