Cover letter for proposal

Eussie

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I had 4 total responses to my queries. Some asked for first 50 + proposal, separate bio. Should I keep the cover letter short? Something like...

Dear Mr. Agent,

Thank you for your positive response to my query. I have enclosed the first 50 pages of Sokorri's Operator for your review.

I would be happy to send you the completed manuscript,

Regards,

xxxxxx


What do you think?