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Epic sci-fi medieval adventure feature script treatmet

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Bleen

Hi.
I'm writing a screenplay and I already have a "complete" treatment. I'm now in the process of writing scenes but since the treatment is my structure I'd really love to hear critique about it. It will help me make a better product.
The current treatment is 23 pages long.

I really, really need some critique, I'd love to hear other thoughts!

Here is the LINK

Thank you,
Pablo
 
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