This is only my second screenplay attempt. It currently stands at 121 pages (and that's ammending for paragraph breaks and continuing scene labels). I need to cut it down. But I don't really know where.
Working title: I'LL SLEEP WHEN I'M DEAD
It's about a group of twelve Army Ranger who return from isolation only to discover they're the only line of defense for the survivors: approximately 60 kids.
Surviving is only half the fight.
If I had to compare it to any movies, I'd say a cross between ALIENS and SLEVIN.
If interested, please send me a PM.
Thanks,
Tom
Working title: I'LL SLEEP WHEN I'M DEAD
It's about a group of twelve Army Ranger who return from isolation only to discover they're the only line of defense for the survivors: approximately 60 kids.
Surviving is only half the fight.
If I had to compare it to any movies, I'd say a cross between ALIENS and SLEVIN.
If interested, please send me a PM.
Thanks,
Tom