EDIT: the genre is Fantasy
I am writing a series of short stories about a traveler and the contents of his Bindlestiff. The audience is perhaps too broad, but I consider it something cute and interesting to read as an adult, and something adventurous for a youngster (ages 8-20 something round about. Key audience being the younger, of course.)
Each story I am trying to keep around 1500 or so pages. Some stories are of course more interesting than others.
I have 3 of the short stories in enough semblence for critisism on structure and such. if ANYONE would read these and let me know honest opinions I would appreciate it, however, I dont want someone to read it and plainly tell me "Oh, it's cute." I'm looking for someone to bust out the "Why the hell would you say that? it doesnt even make sense because..." I take that better than nice little pokes at thought error.
If someone is willing to look into my stories and offer advice and insite PM me with your e-mail and I will send you however many of the short stories you are willing to critic.
(i am trusting that you will not steal my work. From what I understand this is a psuedo-professional forum, so I expect a level of that professionalism to be shown here.)
Thank you,
Z. W. Van Kleeck
I am writing a series of short stories about a traveler and the contents of his Bindlestiff. The audience is perhaps too broad, but I consider it something cute and interesting to read as an adult, and something adventurous for a youngster (ages 8-20 something round about. Key audience being the younger, of course.)
Each story I am trying to keep around 1500 or so pages. Some stories are of course more interesting than others.
I have 3 of the short stories in enough semblence for critisism on structure and such. if ANYONE would read these and let me know honest opinions I would appreciate it, however, I dont want someone to read it and plainly tell me "Oh, it's cute." I'm looking for someone to bust out the "Why the hell would you say that? it doesnt even make sense because..." I take that better than nice little pokes at thought error.
If someone is willing to look into my stories and offer advice and insite PM me with your e-mail and I will send you however many of the short stories you are willing to critic.
(i am trusting that you will not steal my work. From what I understand this is a psuedo-professional forum, so I expect a level of that professionalism to be shown here.)
Thank you,
Z. W. Van Kleeck
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