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Urban Fantasy Beta needed

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Tasmin21

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Right now, my current MS stands at 62,200 words. It needs to be longer, but I've stared at it so long now that I can't even figure out what's what.

I would really appreciate a pair of fresh eyes to tell me what they see as holes in the plot, lacking description, things like that. Tell me what a reader wants to see that I've forgotten to include.

PM me if you're interested.
 
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