Hi All,
Help please. This is women's fiction, and I really don't want to be too graphic in my description. I don't know how to write a sensation that one of my character's is experiencing. He has just left from his first date with a woman he has been in love with since he was a kid. He's now 18.
Does this sound to corny? If yes, any recommendation?
Thanks for your help! Oh, the rural dialect is intentional.
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The throbbing sensation Roy felt in lower part of his body made his knees weak. “I bes’ be gittin’ home. I come by tomorra after suppa to git you.”
“Goodnight, my love,” she said, as she walked into the house.
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During his drive home, Roy thought about stopping at Bessie Mae Durham’s house to help him relieve the throbbing sensation still coming from mid-section.
Help please. This is women's fiction, and I really don't want to be too graphic in my description. I don't know how to write a sensation that one of my character's is experiencing. He has just left from his first date with a woman he has been in love with since he was a kid. He's now 18.
Does this sound to corny? If yes, any recommendation?
Thanks for your help! Oh, the rural dialect is intentional.
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The throbbing sensation Roy felt in lower part of his body made his knees weak. “I bes’ be gittin’ home. I come by tomorra after suppa to git you.”
“Goodnight, my love,” she said, as she walked into the house.
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During his drive home, Roy thought about stopping at Bessie Mae Durham’s house to help him relieve the throbbing sensation still coming from mid-section.