As a reader, I would be more interested in knowing if her body was touching his or how far apart their bodies were. I agree with SLCBOSTON that "parallel" is too mathematical.
Sounds like an erotic moment coming up. For proofing such things talk them out so you don't end up with one person having three hands on another on the head, a breast and a thigh--unless they're Martians :}
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