I have a question. I wrote this story about a young preeteen girl and her cat, and her cat calls her master. Would that make sense? Is the word Master too cliche?
No, too formal. I mean like servant and master.
Yup, I don't think that's enough. As most of the replies here have said, there is a female equivalent (Mistress or Miss). If you want to use Master, there has to be a reason why you're not using the female equivalent. It's not like cats can't understand or distinguish gender. If, however, you want a non-gender specific title to make a point within the story, or as Derek suggests, for humor - that's another matter.Because its like a relationship between cat ang girl. She like serves her in a way.
Because its like a relationship between cat ang girl. She like serves her in a way.
It's easier when you think of the decisions you make for your story in terms of how they impact the reader. Does it tell my reader something about the meaning of the story? Does it convey something about the characters? Or does it bring something to the story that I can't put across in any other way?This is hard.
I don;t see why not. In one book I read all nobility, male and female, were called 'princes'.