Head hopping, defined as the sudden switch of character perspective while in closed, 3rd person tense, is often touted around these parts as a big, fat, no-no.
However, like all rules, this one can be broken. I'd like to share an excerpt from a book I am currently reading.
Head hopping is only an error when done poorly. Keep that in mind when you're editing, everyone.
Happy Christmas,
However, like all rules, this one can be broken. I'd like to share an excerpt from a book I am currently reading.
Bart said:Cassandra ignored him; even concentrating as she was, she could tell Max was annoyed, not scared. Let him move faster if he didn't want to be left in the dark. [...]
[... a bit of dialog follows, without any scene breaks. Then, suddently, we are in Max's head ...]
Max's lips twisted in irritation [...]. What did she want from him? Here he thought he'd been holding up pretty well, given the number of impossible things he'd seen and done in the last few hours.
Head hopping is only an error when done poorly. Keep that in mind when you're editing, everyone.
Happy Christmas,