Beta Reader for Query Letter

E.M.Sterling said:

I have a query letter for a dark urban fantasy/supernatural novel. I would like to have some one read over the query letter for me to see if I could spruce it up some more or if it is short enough and too the point to catch an agent's attention.
I would prefer some one with some experience with query letters and what agents look for.
Thanks

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Why won't you post it in SYW under "Query Letter Help"?

best of luck,
Rose

E.M.Sterling said:

Because I prefer not to post it for the entire board to read. I would rather just one one or two read it.

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E.M.--I'd be glad to help if I can. I have one published novel and two novels currently under submission to publishers through my agent. I just sent out a first draft query to a publisher for a YA fantasy my most recent project and received a positive reply after a day, asking for the book proposal and sample chapters.

let me know if I can be of service,
James